雅思9-12月变题季Part2口语范文赏析

       随着每年要出国留学数据的剧增，所以目前雅思考试，也是我们国内跨越到国外的桥梁，雅思考试每年每月都在考，各种考题实在太多了，无数学生都在备考和考试间徘徊，都是走马观花，忽略考题、标准答案的细嚼慢咽，失去了我们本身学一门语言的灵魂，下面跟启德小编一起来看看Part2口语范文赏析吧！

       9-12月变题季Part2范文赏析
题目：Describe a person who is good at his or her job. You should say:
Who this person is
What his or her job is
How he or she likes the job
and explain why this person is good at the job

       I guess I could get the ball rolling by saying that my father is one of those people I’d consider to be truly dedicated totheir job. Even though being a physician can be really stressful at times, he has always been adept at handling these situations and enjoys making a difference in people’s lives. 

词汇得分点：使用习语get the ball rolling, 表示开始。语法得分点：准确使用让步状语从句和现在完成时，丰富语法多样性。

       My father is a neurologist at an outpatient clinic, but sometimes he also works in the inpatient wards or emergency room at the hospital. As a neurologist, he treats diseases of the nervous system, like strokes. His patients are generally older, as the elderly tend to bemore at risk for these disorders.

语音难点：高级词汇的准确发音[njʊəˈrɒlədʒɪst]在发音项中会加分。词汇得分点：outpatient/inpatient 分别表示门诊部和住院部，细化工作描述的具体部门。

内容延展：用词具体，属于less common vocabulary，细节延展，通过举例细化。
语法得分点：As引导原因状语从句，可替换because。

       Moving on to the question of how my father likes the job, I’d say that it’s probably a mixed bag at times, but it’s definitely a meaningful and rewarding career. I mean, on one hand, he often has a hectic schedule, with countless patients to see and all kinds of diseases to diagnose, and he’s on call several times a month. It can also be heartbreaking to see patients with terminal illnesses fighting a losing battle for their lives. On the other hand, it’s incredibly gratifying for him to see a patient gradually recover, and to know that he played a part in their healing process.

流畅性技巧：在每段引入话题的时候使用了流畅性技巧的结构，这个问题使用了opening phrase + helping question，linking phrase + details的流畅性技巧的结构来进行回答。词汇得分点：使用mixed bag，表示混合体，大杂烩； 灵活使用副词、形容词。

语法得分点：正确使用非谓语

       Finally, as for why my father is good at the job, he’s very knowledgeable and analytical, and he even compares being a doctor to being a detective—you collect all the “clues” or pieces of the puzzle, like the medical history of the patient, the laboratory tests, the vital signs, and you piece everything together to come up witha diagnosis. Also, my father is a really kind and patient person, so patients always feel comfortable around him.

词汇和语法双重得分点：形容词并列，使用并列句。使用高级词汇的时候需同时注意发音问题，比如analytical的重音是学生常出现的问题，注意音标 [ˌænəˈlɪtɪkl]。内容延展：使用比喻，举例排比来细化内容，让内容描述更具体更清晰。同时词汇方面也得到更直接的展示，比如detective，vital signs（生命特征）， come up with, diagnosis(诊断)。

        To wrap things up, I look up to my father as someone who truly cares about helping others, and being a physician allows him to do just that. 

流利度得分点：衔接词to wrap things up 表总结，衔接词的灵活使用在全文中也出现了几处，都是在流利度方面能起到贯穿篇章，使内容更连贯的作用。语法得分点：正确使用定语从句，并列句。

      综上，就是雅思9-12月变题季Part2口语范文赏析，不管考题难易程度是什么等次，我们要挖缺他最灵魂深处的内容，为什么用这样的语法，为什么不是用这个词，为什么我要这样表述等等，都是我们深入考题的主要点，希望对正在备考的同学有帮助。